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She sits on her bed
Waiting for the sun to rise
She has been awake for days
Black circles form under her eyes
She smiles…more drama is always needed

She stares into a blue screen
Her television has been on sleeping mode
She tries to count the freckles on her thighs
Pulls her hair behind her ears

Her lover is sleeping by her right side
Clueless to her actions
She stares at him
She tries to poke him
He’s still asleep…always fell into a deep sleep

She tries to get out of bed
The cracking sound forces her to stay still
She looks at her watch…2 hours till sunrise
She lies on her back

Her second lover is sleeping by her left side
Muttering some nonsense
She stares at him
She laughs at his words
He would never know…talking while asleep

She stares at the ceiling
She sits straight
She shakes her head
She’s alone in bed
She says:
“My mind is playing tricks on me”

Fade to black

She stands in her living room
Wearing her white silk dress
Takes a gulp from her coffee
Pulls her hair behind her ears

Her lover kisses her
Sits on a sofa
Admiring her frozen posture
He has no clue…she has made sure of that

Her second lover hugs her
Smells her hair
Kisses her neck
She smiles…he would never find out

Tears drown her face
She drops her mug
She watches it splatter into tiny pieces
She shakes her head
She says:
“You’re gone! I’m alone…I’m alone”

Fade to black

She stands in her photo lab
Surrounded by red light
She rubs her eyes
Pulls her hair behind her ears

Her lover hands her a set of negatives
He comments on her new work
He thinks it’s the best so far
She stares at a light bulb…what a fool

Her second lover stands by her side
Their favorite song plays in the background
He grabs her hand and forces her to dance
She closes her eyes…such a great dancer

She tares her pictures
She closes her ears
Takes a deep breath
She’s alone
She says:
“I’m a coward…a coward!”

Fade to black

She lies on her bed
Staring at the ceiling
She closes her eyes
Her lover is sleeping soundly on her right side
Her second lover is muttering on her left side

She pokes them
They don’t even move
She jumps on her bed
She screams and kicks them
They continue to sleep

She stares at them
Panting heavily
She says:
“I deserve this…I deserve it!
Is it true when someone leaves you…part of them is stuck with you?
Is it true that you will keep haunting me…even after I’ve been gone?
I’m gone…I’m truly gone…will you remember me?”


Fade to black
Inspired by the crazy and stupid mistakes we make in life...a little "Un Menage A trois"....the little skeletons in our closets ;)

Thanx to :iconwithoutwax: for helping me come up with the title ;)

enjoy :blowkiss:
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corpsebride00 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
i like it alot...
sad as usual madam lina, but very well written...

u know, maybe its just me, but i believe that no one will ever forget a person who effect his life, negative or positive...
i think its a beautiful thing :)
we will always be remembered...

and as for the 2 lovers... i dono... its like... umm how do i explain it :( ummmmmmmmmmmm!!!
bleh i dono lol... it makes more sense in my head ;p
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
hahahahahah as long as it makes sense mwuah!!

yes we will always be remembered and those who linger in our minds would never be forgotten as well :blowkiss:

Thanx sweetie mwuah!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007  Professional Writer
when someone leaves you, part of them is stuck with you...
or more precisely, part of you becomes that someone...
and with each new person, another part of you becomes a new someone...
until at the end, you realise you're no more...
and that body you're dragging is nothing but puzzled parts of souls you've already lost a long time ago...
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:iconlynnelle:
Lynnelle Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
:tears: that is so true :hug:

you couldn't have expressed it better :blowkiss:

I guess I'm no more...right? :tears:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007  Professional Writer
you're more than enough...
and with an attached fairytale in the package kameina :P
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:iconlynnelle:
Lynnelle Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2007
:XD: :D :hug: thank you habiby :blowkiss:

and you are also more than enough ;)

mwuah!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LouiseOdier Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
very good story and an interesting way of telling. :)

susanna
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:iconlynnelle:
Lynnelle Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
Thank you sweetie :hug:

thanx for the fav :blowkiss:
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:iconlouiseodier:
LouiseOdier Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
:smooch:
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
:XD: :hug:
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